Daniel Meyer
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The State of confusion.
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« on: April 26, 2012, 01:05:52 PM » |
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To paraphrase CCR: "Hope you’ve got your crap together… Hope you’re quite prepared to die…" http://lifeisaroad.com/blog/2012/04/26/alive/-dm |
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R J
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« Reply #1 on: April 26, 2012, 01:16:48 PM » |
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Daniel my lad.
The following is from your story.
Is it correct as written?
The elimination of the art from the deed
Or should it read this way?
The elimination of the art from the dead
Good read, you sure have a knack for words.
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R J
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« Reply #2 on: April 26, 2012, 01:17:29 PM » |
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Hell's Bells, I might just be reading it wrong.
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Excessive comfort breeds weakness. PttP
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« Reply #3 on: April 26, 2012, 01:31:25 PM » |
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Is it correct as written? Quite correct as penned. Almost eerily so.  |
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Daniel Meyer
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The State of confusion.
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« Reply #4 on: April 26, 2012, 02:32:29 PM » |
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The elimination of the art from the deed
Yep, the deed...or the act. Glad you enjoyed! |
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« Reply #5 on: April 26, 2012, 03:33:54 PM » |
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FFFFFing cages.  Again sir i have to say you DO have a way with the wrtten word.  I have a daughter that don't even know what a record player is much less CCR.  Ah well this to or us shall and will pass. RIDE SAFE. |
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Today is the tommorow you worried about yesterday. If at first you don't succeed screw it-save it for nite check. 1964 1968 U S Navy. Two cruises off Nam.
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bigguy
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« Reply #6 on: April 26, 2012, 05:47:33 PM » |
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Mighty fine word slinging there Danial. Enjoyed it.
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« Reply #7 on: April 26, 2012, 06:13:01 PM » |
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Very well done.
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Yea though I ride through the valley of the Shadow of Death I shall fear no evil. For I ride the Baddest Mother F$#^er In that valley!
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« Reply #8 on: April 26, 2012, 06:33:10 PM » |
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Very nice Daniel. I just downloaded your Life Is a Road, the Sould Is a Motorcycle last night from iTunes.
Thank You!
Mark
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...do justice, love kindness, walk humbly... The Bible: Read, Apply, Repeat 2012 Victory Cross Country Tour, in all its pearl white beauty www.bikersforchrist.org |
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« Reply #9 on: April 26, 2012, 06:45:38 PM » |
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Excellent. |
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"Extremism in the defense of liberty is no vice. And... moderation in the pursuit of justice is no virtue.'' -- Barry Goldwater, Acceptance Speech at the Republican Convention; 1964  |
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Whatever it is, it's better in the wind.
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« Reply #10 on: April 27, 2012, 05:32:38 AM » |
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Daniel, Again thanks for making my day I had to laugh hard when I read, "KeyOnThumbTheButtonCheckTheBrakesOnTheWayOutTheDrivewayIsThereAnyGasInThisThing?" I do not knwo how many times I have asked that as I am rolling down the road, again Thanks |
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« Reply #11 on: April 27, 2012, 06:28:53 AM » |
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Very good read Daniel. Pretty much sums it up. On the last paragraph, I would have to age modify the statement, "Until I stop for gas" to say "Until I have to Pee"  The Vstrom gets good gas mileage and it has a big tank. Again, excellent read, thanks. |
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« Reply #12 on: April 27, 2012, 08:17:35 AM » |
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"My desire is instantly translated into movement"Nailed it...
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Daniel Meyer
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« Reply #13 on: April 27, 2012, 08:49:57 AM » |
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On the last paragraph, I would have to age modify the statement, "Until I stop for gas" to say "Until I have to Pee" LOL Wayne! I hear ya! I may have to add that! -dm |
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