So how much did you pay for the special effects?!?!?! While reading that, just as I got to the storm in the story, there was a loud thunder crack that sounded like it was right outside my house... No buildup, no warning, just KA-RAAAAAAAAAAAACK...
How much does it cost to arrange THAT kind of special effects for your readers?!?!?!
I *do* aim to please. Please, do be careful when reading about the hail...