That looks simple enough, are they effective? Reckon I could lose 20db with 6 lollipops?
Volume is directly related to how much open area is around the lollipop.
If your inspectors balk at what is clearly easily removed, you can, with a bit more work, make this:

Gas pipe end caps, drilled and tapped around the sides in 3 places for socket-head set screws. You can drill the center hole to a size that sets any volume you wish, and mounting just takes a hex wrench, ground down to just fit onto the screws. Grinding the three lobes around the sides, as shown, also increases volume. Once mounted in the pipes, they appear like included baffles, so fool many inspectors.
The screws shown have heads, but I've since decided headless ones work, and look, better. I used 5mm screws, BTW.